RE-Write my Product Descriptions

I am looking for a professional description about my company, it is an advertising company, I will use it to make a video presentation for my customers. It's very important that who applies for the job is a native english speaker. It's gonna be a 2 minutes video so I need something very short but it has to be very attractive to costumers. I will provide all the features my website has and based to that you will be asked to write the text script. Somebody did already the job but i released that something was wrong, so i need it to be re-written, I will provide his script as well. I want to make it like american tv commercial style. Thanks.