I need re-view and re-write my script

I have vast experience in php and web languages. PLease let me know with the script so that i can deliver. I can deliver this in a day or two if its not big but i need to see it first. let me know once you are back.

Hi, I'm a professional web developer from Dallas, TX. I've been doing this a decade and a half and have a degree in computer science. I'm interested in this revision project. You can contact me to discuss this further or show me the script. I know this is something I can get reviewed ASAP and knocked out quickly. I'm specialized in computer and network security in college, so I'm very knowledgeable in these areas. I can help secure your script for you. Sincerely, Jonathan McCartney

A proposal has not yet been provided

Dear Hiring Manager, Thank you for this wonderful opportunity. Today Your job posting has caught my attention because I’m a looking for a job and I’m keenly considering your job post including these skills. I have excellent experience in Website Designing/Development. I believe my abilities would be perfect for your venture. I can finish this job within the necessary time frame. I am professional website designer/developer. I have 2+ years of experience in this field.

I am new in freelancer, but have 16+ yrs experiences on database software development. My major projects are: Product Level Involvement for System Study, DB, Development, Project Management and after implementation support --> 1. Trade Finance Module for Banking Project (DB: MS SQL Server, Oracle) 2. ERP for Garments, Retails and Trading business (DB: MySQL). 3. HRMS for Medium enterprises (DB: My SQL) Customized Software Involvement of System Study, Development, Project Management and after implementation support --> 4. MIST project of National Board of Revenue in Bangladesh (DB: Oracle) 5. DC Office Automation in Bangladesh (DB: Oracle) Core PHP and MySQL Project --> 6. Accounting for small enterprises (DB: MySQL ) 7. HRMS for small enterprises (DB: MySQL ) Last 1 yr my sole involvement on PHP and MySQL. So, I am confident, I can satisfy the requirements.