I am a native English speaker and proofreader. Please see a sample of my writing below. This is from an unpublished and unfinished military romance.
Evie yelped as he twisted her around, now her face was pressed against the wall. Aiden walked away for a moment, leaving her tied up and quivering. She had never been so turned on. So desperate. She tried to squeeze her thighs together to create some kind of sensation against her clit, pressure, anything. She was dying for it, but whenever she shifted the weight off her toes the leather belt would dig into her skin.
When Aiden came back a minute later he was carrying another belt. Evie’s skin prickled with anticipation.
“I think you know you’ve been a very bad girl,” Aiden leaned in and whispered in her ear. She could hear the smile on his lips, and she knew he was enjoying this as much as she was.
“You need to punish me,” she whispered back, her heart racing as she said it. She felt Aiden’s hand trail up the inside of her leg again, and this time he slipped his fingers under her panties and pushed two of them deep inside her. Evie moaned as he slid the length of them inside her, brushing against her g-spot. She could feel how wet she was already, just from the anticipation of him touching her.
“Does that feel good?” he asked, his body was pressed against hers, she could feel his muscles taught against her and the bulge of his cock through his jeans. She desperately wanted to get her hands around it, but first she needed to cum. Hard.
“Fuck,” she whispered, “it feels incredible.”
He increased his speed and intensity, pounding his fingers into her faster and harder, until she was pulling against the leather restraint and moaning. She tightened her thighs involuntarily, on the brink of orgasm, she wanted to push him deeper inside her. To grip him and let him feel her pussy contract around his fingers, but just as she was about to cum he pulled his hand back and smacked her across her ass with the belt.
Evie screamed. And, to her surprise, wanted more.
“Again,” she gasped. And she heard Aiden respond with a low groan of satisfaction. He hit her again, harder, the tingling burning sensation spreading out from where he hit down her legs and between them. She moaned with pleasure.
“Harder,” she screamed.
This time Aiden slipped his fingers inside her pussy again, deep and hard, before smacking her three times in a row. She arched her back and screamed, shaking as she came around his fingers. The orgasm came in waves, hot pleasure bursting from between her thighs and washing into her belly and down her legs. She moaned and let all of her weight pull against the leather belt holding her to the wall.
Aiden slowed his pace, but he didn’t stop. His thumb pressed against her clit and circled it, sending shivers of pleasure through her.
“I can’t take anymore,” Evie protested.
“This is punishment, remember?” he whispered in her ear and pressed harder against her clit. “Besides, it’s only just started.”