Article Rewriting

Hi There's a projected and a freelancer did it for me, however, he didn't done it as I wanted and later when I asked him to change it as I requested he only changed the titles, anw I'm going to upload the project and list what I want to be changed.. The previous freelancer who did this project considered the player as a company and made it like a merger however since it's a company the situation is different because it's a football club and a player.. please do the required changes and any other mistakes you see