Choupinett - The Storm

Gladys, the author (pseudonym) has written a child's book for the Kindle (e-books). Firstly, it has been written in French, and I translated into English, and corrected. However, it remains a translation. So, I would like an English/American mother tongue person (writer) improves this e-book. The content is comprehensive, but the phraseology needs to be improved. Please, add your creativity in correcting this short Choupinette's story. Thank you in advance.