I would like to request English proofreading of 180 words.
I will use this in my short speech at the university today.
I want to request the person who can immediately.
The following sentence is the sentences to be proofread.
EU is currently in danger of collapse.
In recent years many issues such as the European debt crisis and immigration and refugee issues are taken up.
Also, the UK has decided to withdraw from the EU by a referendum, and in other countries political parties with the idea of leaving from the EU are intensifying.
However, the European Union has continued for more than 20 years, in the case of including the European Community, because there are many benefits for Member States.
For example, economic reinvigorate through liberalization of movement of people, goods, services, capital in EU,
It makes it harder for war to occur due to strong economic ties, and in the event of financial crisis Member States can get support from the EU, even small countries can negotiate equally against countries with strong economic power as the EU.
My personal opinion seems to be that there are many people who wish to withdraw from the EU, immigrants and refugees become a major factor despite economically great merit.
It would be best to stay in the EU and seek out how to respond to immigrants and refugees.
Thank you for listening.