Hello,
We share a passion for an improved quality of life through fitness and health. I have a B.A. degree in psychology and a M.S. degree in Recreation and Parks Administration. Both degrees allowed me to research and write about the truth that our minds have greater influence on our bodies than any other life factor.
Along with my knowledge of your book's topic, I also have a skilled eye for identifying errors in grammar, spelling, punctuation, flow, content, and the overall understanding of writing. I appreciate that your audience is the lay person, someone who is not interested in technical jargon. A person frustrated with their weight does not want to get lost in unhelpful wordiness. I will ensure your to-the-point instruction helps the individual succeed in their weight loss goals.
My editing technique involves an initial read-through for basic errors, then a second read-through for more detailed critique of the content, flow, and understanding. I will correct basic errors and suggest changes to improve organization, readability, and understanding. I use Microsoft Office Word track changes.
My goal is for your readers to understand, retain, and apply the information in your book, and have it result in a life changing decision.
I am new to Freelancer.com, but my 15 years of experience means I am not new to editing. Please contact me to further discuss the details, and take the next steps to completing your project.