case analysis revise based on the comments

I have done one case analysis by following the segment my boss wanted, however he left some comments and wanted me to rework it, so I need a business management background worker to do it for me. You have to read the case first from the PDF file page 726 to 738 then do the correction according to the comments showing as my word file The parts highlighted with red need to be re- paraphrased or revised. this work is due to this Friday, but ASAP