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kenadra
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Hi there, I revised your text. I found the topic really interesting, although I hope that your main text is much more like your other excerpt, because this one was quite a mess. :) I indicated where I would definitely require additional information on text. I'm not available 24/7, but I check my messages regularly. Anyway, I hope you like my version. Contact me in case you have any questions!