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Hi there, I have proofread the sample and have corrected some small grammatical errors. I have also suggested some words which sound more natural, these are in red. I also have some comments, which relate to some of the sentences that are a little confusing, these are in blue and italicized. Apart from that this seems to be a very well-written and thoughtfully researched piece of work, and I'm sure I would enjoy the rest of your work should I get the chance to see it! Thanks for your time. Jon

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