I am looking for a skilled article writer to write up essay about control diet.

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I am looking for a skilled article writer to write up essay about my patent.
I have invention and I have been registed this patent in USPTO.
An essay about a new invention to control someone diet.
You should include these ideas:
• The importance of maintaining the number of calories consumed.
• It is difficult to prevent yourself from enjoying himself with food.
• Introducing the new invention to readers.
• How the new invention works.
• Advantages of new invention.
• The last paragraph: encourages readers to use this invention.
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((The hinge mechanism may be from plastic materials or it may be preferred to make the hinge mechanism from paper material to be biodegradable. Biodegradable is the preferred so that it may be used as fertilizer for plants like used coffee grounds at coffee shops.))
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could you put a paragraph that talk about using this invention from diabetes and hypertension patient for their diet.

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  • pdeb85
    pdeb85
    • 1週間前

    Hello! Please check my essay, entry number 10, and give feedback. Thank you!

    • 1週間前
    1. pdeb85
      pdeb85
      • 5日前

      Hello! Please check my revised essay, entry number #17 . I have rewritten it according to your feedback. Thank you!

      • 5日前
    2. pdeb85
      pdeb85
      • 3時間前

      Hello! Please check my revised essay, entry number #21 . I have rewritten it according to your latest feedback. Thank you!

      • 3時間前
  • ShikhaSheoran
    ShikhaSheoran
    • 2日前

    Hi, Kindly check entry #20 and let me know your feedback on it. Thank you!

    • 2日前
  • ashikur199660
    ashikur199660
    • 5日前

    Hey please wait for me. I will submit. Thank you

    • 5日前
  • Estadler
    Estadler
    • 1週間前

    Please check #13 with my adjustments

    • 1週間前
  • Estadler
    Estadler
    • 1週間前

    No, problem. Thanks for the feedback- it enables me to make the adjustments you want.

    • 1週間前
  • Estadler
    Estadler
    • 1週間前

    Hi, Please check my essay and leave feedback. Thank you!

    • 1週間前
    1. naefcom
      コンテスト所有者
      • 1週間前

      Good work.
      could you read my feedback to Pratyush D.
      I like your essay because it's a brief but you need to put some headlines and arrange the paragraph carefully.
      you have putted all pictures nearby to each other.
      and you should put the last paragraph at the end.

      • 1週間前
  • naefcom
    コンテスト所有者
    • 2週間前

    thank you so much Marius.
    fantastic essay.

    • 2週間前
    1. naefcom
      コンテスト所有者
      • 1週間前

      I want some modification in your article:

      you just talk about obesity and the Diseases associated with obesity, could you add a paragraph talk about a perfect body and its importance for a beauty appearance and success in the life.

      In the paragraph 6: you have wrote ( a simple plastic food page) but the device will be made of paper and wood materials. ((The hinge mechanism may be from plastic materials or it may be preferred to make the hinge mechanism from paper material to be biodegradable. Biodegradable is the preferred so that it may be used as fertilizer for plants like used coffee grounds at coffee shops.))

      • 1週間前
    2. MariusAlza9
      MariusAlza9
      • 1週間前

      Sure, please check my new submission to see the required modifications! Thank your feedback!

      • 1週間前
  • ailinemacabuhay
    ailinemacabuhay
    • 2週間前

    Hi there, please do check mine, and am willing to revise if necessary.

    • 2週間前
    1. naefcom
      コンテスト所有者
      • 1週間前

      l liked that You have used the question to grab the reader attention at the beginning and at the end.

      could you add a pictures and puts headlines and font on your article.

      In the paragraph 2 and 3 you have just talk about obesity and how its happened but you did not mention anything about keep body fit.

      In the paragraph 5 and 7 you have used the word (cheat) and I prefer a positive expression.

      You have wrote a lot about appearance and a few about how the device work.

      in the last paragraph you need to rephrase the sentence and increase sentence to encourage the readers to use this invention.

      • 1週間前
  • naefcom
    コンテスト所有者
    • 1週間前

    I will put all my feedback in public to avoid these from future writers....

    • 1週間前
  • zaynraza49
    zaynraza49
    • 2週間前

    Check Entry 8 please. Feedback will be appreciated.

    • 2週間前
  • naefcom
    コンテスト所有者
    • 2週間前

    I am waiting more entries until the contest finish.

    • 2週間前
  • ashikur199660
    ashikur199660
    • 2週間前

    Asslamau alaikum please wait for me.

    • 2週間前
    1. naefcom
      コンテスト所有者
      • 2週間前

      ok

      • 2週間前

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