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  • mohammedhaddad88
    mohammedhaddad88
    • 2年間前

    show time

    • 2年間前
  • LaCynn
    LaCynn
    • 3年間前

    NICE!

    • 3年間前
  • popohouse15
    popohouse15
    • 3年間前

    very excellent logo

    • 3年間前
  • pratamafadhil
    pratamafadhil
    • 4年間前

    Hi, I've uploaded the revised version at entry #80 .

    • 4年間前
  • saraalmudhaf
    コンテスト所有者
    • 4年間前

    I like the contrast in face size of the man's and woman's. I like that they are asymmetrical, not identical, and not a reflection.

    • 4年間前
  • pratamafadhil
    pratamafadhil
    • 4年間前

    Sure, right away.

    • 4年間前
  • saraalmudhaf
    コンテスト所有者
    • 4年間前

    I like how you filled the gap between the man's chin and woman's nose with a beard. So useful and very well utilized. However, I am not a fan of the negative space under the woman's chin. Would you experiment with that please or just close it up or minimize it. Thanks

    • 4年間前
  • pratamafadhil
    pratamafadhil
    • 4年間前

    Thank you four the insight. i will get back to you right away.

    • 4年間前
  • saraalmudhaf
    コンテスト所有者
    • 4年間前

    Try using the same mustache for the woman's lips. Change color and reflect (upside-down). Try slightly bigger eyes for both without eyelash for woman. This is also a characteristic of Arabian eyes. Try again a closed eye for the womanonly, this time with eyelash. I like the idea of the blush for the woman but not so much the execution (the blur). It is not in harmony with the whole style. I like the shadow of the ear and chin.

    • 4年間前
    1. saraalmudhaf
      コンテスト所有者
      • 4年間前

      I believe closed eyes will successfully communicate a forehead kiss and support the current position of the man over the woman. Check entry #47 for reference.

      • 4年間前
  • saraalmudhaf
    コンテスト所有者
    • 4年間前

    I love the color scheme.

    • 4年間前
  • saraalmudhaf
    コンテスト所有者
    • 4年間前

    I'm very happy.

    • 4年間前
  • saraalmudhaf
    コンテスト所有者
    • 4年間前

    Try to experiment with the gold headpiece for the woman. It would add more cultural context. Try to unify all gold stroke thickness including the black headpiece for the man (one thickness). Thank you.

    • 4年間前
    1. saraalmudhaf
      コンテスト所有者
      • 4年間前

      Entries #47 #36

      • 4年間前
  • saraalmudhaf
    コンテスト所有者
    • 4年間前

    I like the digital pattern design. Works very well with e- as in digital or electronic.

    • 4年間前
  • saraalmudhaf
    コンテスト所有者
    • 4年間前

    I can see a heart (right one). I like it.

    • 4年間前
  • saraalmudhaf
    コンテスト所有者
    • 4年間前

    I love it.

    • 4年間前
  • saraalmudhaf
    コンテスト所有者
    • 4年間前

    This is so far my very best! Thank you.

    • 4年間前

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